Your project page is your shop window - it needs to grab attention and inspire people to back you. Here's how to make yours stand out:
Choose a strong title
Your title should instantly tell people what your project is and where it's happening:
Keep it short and memorable
Include your location
Use action words like 'Transform', 'Create', 'Save'
Make it clear what you're doing
Good examples:
"Bridges to the Crystal Palace Dinosaurs"
"Transform the Common Room - Roman Road"
"Help reopen Camley Street Nature Park"
Remember your project title will automatically generate the URL for your project, though you can amend it yourself. We recommend making sure that the project title and URL are consistent with one another.
Write a compelling description
Start with a clear, punchy summary that answers:
What are you creating?
Where is it happening?
Why is it needed?
Who will benefit?
Then expand on this with more detail about:
The specific changes you'll make
The impact it will have
Why your area needs this
Who's behind the project
How you'll deliver it
Be specific about deliverables
List exactly what you'll create with the money raised. Focus on tangible outcomes like:
"Plant 50 new trees along the high street"
"Install new sound equipment in the community centre"
"Create an outdoor classroom for 30 children"
"Build a covered seating area with 10 benches"
Avoid vague statements like "improve the area" or "help young people" - be precise about what backers' money will achieve.
Highlight the benefits
Help potential backers understand the difference your project will make:
Explain how it will improve the local area
Describe who will use it and how
Include any research or evidence that shows why it's needed
Share supporting quotes from community members
Mention any wider positive impacts
Use strong visuals
Images and video are crucial for bringing your project to life:
Images
Show the current space/situation
Include drawings or plans of what you'll create
Add photos of your team and supporters
Use bright, clear images that work well at different sizes
Upload at least 3-4 different images
Video
Videos significantly increase your chances of success. Create one that:
Is short (2-3 minutes maximum)
Introduces you and your team
Shows the project location
Explains why you need support
Features community members
Ends with a clear call to action
You don't need professional equipment - a smartphone video can work well if it's authentic and passionate.
Set clear milestones
Add a timeline showing key steps in your project:
When you'll start work
Major delivery phases
Key completion dates
When people can start using it
Final checks
Before submitting your page:
Read everything aloud to check it sounds natural
Remove any jargon or technical terms
Check all spelling and grammar
Ask friends to review it and give feedback
Remember, your page needs to work hard even when you're not there to explain it. Make it clear, compelling and complete.
Ready to start creating your page? Visit www.spacehive.com/create to begin, or check out some successful projects for inspiration.